I would have removed the salt and pepper, some slight rearangement of the products on the table. Also I would have opted for a freashly tapped glass in stead of one were the collar is gone. Slightly straighten the photograph so that the bar and the table don't slide away to the left and finally a larger file to upload. I like the idea of your setup and with a bit more effort this could have been a great photograph.
A bit busy - one cannot tell what the product being offered is, unless you're offering a bowl of soup and a beer in a pub. Also, you need to use the full size available to you - you can go up to 800 pixels on the long side per the rules. When you go to the submit page to enter a challenge, look on the left and there is a summary of the rules and a link to more information. (Commenting only.)
The key challenge with this shot is focus. As in what is the focus. I've got multiple items that could be the focus. Remember the goal is to convey your focus without title. Things you could do to improve: shift the glass to the foreground, reduce additional table clutter. Use DOF (depth of field) to blur out the background in order to force me to focus on the shot.
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