I really like this...but I'm not such a fan of dead center...but that is minor, you get extra points for clarity (which most didn't even come close to)
very simple... this can be your best advantage, well uh this can be your greatest disadvantage as well.. i remember seeing a similar composition in The Egg challenge as well.
This is risky. Nice, but risky. A slightly non-calibrated monitor will have this look too bright. Its nice but not saying much in the creativity department. I do appreciate the technical difficulty of this though.