Greetings from the Critique Club
First Impressions:
Very bright and vibrant colors
Technical (Comp, lighting, color, focus, Processing):
This shot really seems pretty technically sound. Your comp, lighting, color and focus all seem pretty much spot on.
Challenge:
Being a free study, yeah I think this met the challenge
Artistic/Emotion:
The colors and the models pose really make this a lovely artistic shot, well done.
Summary:
8 challenges in and you are placing in the top 100 of a free study is not bad at all. You take excellent portraits. I would be very happy with this score in the free study as they are quite difficult to score really high in. Only a few sub 4 votes and they may very well have just been because the voter doesn’t like the color or just isn’t interested in portraits. In the end I think this scored well but the shot just lacked that something that makes the voter want to stay longer or keep coming back. You are off to a great start at DPC, I look forward to seeing your stuff in the future.
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