I like the feel of this but if I had to 'nit-pic' it would be to mention his goose-flesh in the shadow cast by her chin. Also the chest hair might be better shaved rather than regrowth. good luck
Really looks like a photograph from a movie scene. Very well done and a type of image we don't see that often in a challenge. Changes from all the landscapes, animal portraits,... *10*
nice shot, the lighting of her shadow on his chest does not quite work for me due to that second light source maybe the brighter part needed to be burnt a touch.