Cute! You must like to be hard on yourself, trying to do two at once! I'm guessing its motion blur that causes the twin on the left to be slightly fuzzy? Lighting could be softened somewhat to prevent the harsh lights in the eyes (or you could photoshop them out)--just that they look a little like deer in headlights, I'm afraid.
How very cute. Love their expressions. You had tow ork hard on this one, I'm sure!!!! Great poses, expressive eyes, good catchlights. Well done for working with babies! :o)
Lighting: Well balanced with strong spark of life from the catchlight.
Pose: The poses work well as they are each displaying their individuality in the face of the obvious similarities.
Background: Works well with the models. the only thing I would attempt to change would be to move the models and the background further apart to minimize the shadows.
Cute kids, especially the expression on the left. Focus appears a little soft, but that could be from resizing. Would love to see more dramatic lighting.
Great photo. How'd you get them both to smile?? Only thing I'd change is the background...darker without stars. That way, those cuties would stand out even more.
Beautiful boys! Too bad they look so flat. It doesn't do them justice... Try moving your lights around to the sides. Also, it looks like ya might have used a flash here, try it without. You'll definately need a tripod and a little luck cause kids are a little squrimy, but it should pay off!
TC
Must have been hard to get them both to smile at the same time. There seems to be a blue cast on the photo and perhaps some more depth of field would have rendered both guys in sharp focus.
Image has slight bluish tint, or maybe the blue stripes don't contrast the background enough. The stars & circles on the background are distracting.
I used to have babies. Then teen-agers.
Cute kids.
man...I'm sure this was a tough one to get! Just for that, I'm scoring you a 7, and then upping it to an 8 for the cuteness of the kiddos. Lighting is beautiful. :)
The models are cute. They are a little too close to the background. They should be placed about a foot and half away and then a separate light should be directed at the background to eliminate shadows.
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