That's interesting. I studied the photo and particularly enjoyed the fact that the girls eyes were closed and that you had captured her completely immersed in the moment, and then went to read the comments! It is her closed eyes that make the photo for me.
lighting a little too harsh. possibly built in camera flash? cute little girl.. but if she had kept her eyes open, it would have been a much better shot.
nice capture. It would have been nice if you did not have the lady with a skirt in the top of frame. Perhaps try to time if to get both of the girls faces or change position.