Greetings from the Critique Club.
First impressions are of a great sense of scale.
Technically this is ok. There are a few areas that show the lighting could be a bit softer - the front of the car and up near the shoelaces - I see you used a softbox though - hmmm. The show has cast quite a big shadow that cuts right through the car. Composition is good and the DOF seems excellent.
Artistically this is good. Humor is often not rewarded at DPC. As commenters have mentioned, the POV could be adjusted to add a sense of drama too - maybe lower and more front on to the car?
In summary a good solid shot that I'd have rated a bit closer to 6 than it scored.
Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry |
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