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This is a very interesting shot indeed. First of all, your subject is great, no flaws there, and this could be done very well. The biggest problem I see is your background. Truthfully! It's just blue! I'd like to see something more interesting like a guy looking into the clock, or maybe just a plain white background. Second, I don't really feel that color ads much here, I'd love to see a high-contrast version of this in B&W if possible. And third, The dirty glass and the reflections on it just take all the rest out of the photo. if you could have captured that glass in a more pristine way, and found a background that better suits the subject, you would've gotten a MUCH higher score. Hope that was helpful! :D
-  ColemanGariety
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