Pretty model and interesting eye make-up but the picture doesn't really seem to engage or send a clear message . .
Are we looking at the interesting and unusual hat ?
or the interesting and unusual eye make up ?
The eye catching blue blouse that provides the only strong colour in the picture ?
Or the fact that the blouse seems to carry on being open out the bottom of the picture . . which many would find interesting :- ) ?
Lots of different elements and many of them really quite good - but no single focal point to focus on.
Perhaps a square crop and a background of either white or black would lift this and focus the viewers attention more ?
Good luck though. |
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