Nicely captures the headware aspect - but we sort of lose contact with the model inside - perhaps if you had just brightened her face a little more - or brought her eye detail out it would have just had a little more punch ?
This could be improved with just a small bump in brightness. As it is, the potentially beautiful background looks just a little dull, and her eye, the main focus point, isn't obvious enough.
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