IMHO I think the different lines just confuse the eye. I just don't know where to look and there doesn't seem to be a real focal point. It was different so I like that. keep it up and congrats on a new personal best.
There is a focus point here and I think it is on the far left pencil eraser in the foreground. It is such a short focal length that the entire photo looks out of focus. I would have probably focused on the brand name on the top pencil or something.