Nice concept and a great touch with the police tape across the tape, but if a photographer was there, there DEFINITELY would be some police/detectives standing around. Just an idea for next time. Also, the body looks a little bit too symetrically aligned with the door. Otherwise, this is a GREAT shot!
I like the erotic nature of this shot with the boobies visible from out the sheet. That intruder had some new shoes! color might have worked with that oriental rug
Its an ok photo but it simply shouts that its staged to me, maybe next time don't have the person in the centre of the rug with their arms neatly at their side etc.
I like your idea. Good concept. I get a feel of being too "set up" though. I have nothing against set-ups, i do them myself, it just seems too obvious in this case. Maybe if the body were not laying so straight out and neat, you know, bend the legs or half twisted on side or something like that. Maybe some kind of broken something, or mess up the rug, or some sign of conflict. Of course, if this is real, and you happened to catch it, wow!, ignore what I said and send me a message "what was I thinking?" ... hehehe.