This goes in order of what I notice first:
1) Festival? What festival? I see a girl infront of a wall. Give me an interesting background, if it's a festival shouldn't there be other people there? I don't need to see any details, but lights or something as a backdrop, not concrete.
2) Cute idea, but because of the background it looks like you did this at home, well and the fact that she has a china plate instead of a paper one...
3) The flash lit her up great, but the shadows are too harsh. Good color though.
Score: 5 |