I love the look on her face. This would be great if all her face were in sharp focus, but it seems just a little bit off. Still worth a vote on the positive side for what you did capture.
This picture has an incredible amount of potential, but it is out of focus and it really takes it from incredible to not so good. If it were in focus, the snow was falling and she was looking at the camera....this would be a knock out image.
This is an excelent portrait. The subject is beautiful and bright. The picture has a little soft blur to it. I am pretty sure the focus is good, it's just not too sharp. It's a personal preference though. It looks like the hair on the forhead is a little sharper than the eyes are.