From a quick glance at your portfolio, it is easy to see you are using your considerable photography skills to record the development of your little girl. And this is another lovely example of that record.
You received a good score for this very good effort and I can find little, if anything, to critique here. Your whites were handled very, very well as is the sharpness, placement in the frame and appealing story of the image. How you got your little girl to pose so beautifully must be a story in itself.
I often purposely avoid reading titles while voting, but in this case the title might have cleared up my impression that there was something a little creepy about the bride's hands! (I still gave it a 7, btw).
I liked it. I thought it was a really cute idea. Did she like seeing the photo? The lighting is perfect. Your wedding dress looks like it's in great condition btw. I'm afraid to see what mine looks like lol.