Greetings from the Critique Club.
First impressions are that this is a great location but the processing is too much (as your notes allude to)
Technically this is good. The composition is good and it seems exposed nicely to capture the graffiti and not blow out the lights.
Artistically this could be really good if we could see the graffiti better. There seems to be so much here that could capture our interest but the processing hides much of it. A person in shot would have added a lot more too, even if they were in the distance walking along - maybe in that bright area at the end where there seems to be a bollard?
In summary that has potential but it didn't quite make it.
Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry |