Lacks the impact of the new, but well done. Although I think your monthly free study of the same girl was peerless and should have been a ribbon winner, this one seems to have washed out her features a tiny bit. Still, way high up on my list.
Great portrait of a very beautiful subject. I like the accent lighting on the hair, and the way it also plays on her shoulders. I do think the light on her face is just a little flat; her nose tends to get lost. That's a really small niggle in what is otherwise a fabulous portrait. Kudos.
I love this !! the highlight on the left is just a tad too harsh and grabs a little too much attention. Her left hand I felt could have been posed better.I love the warmth and the naturalness of the model. EXCELLENT ! 9
I also liked your other portrait of her in a recent free study. I believe I, let me check, yes I favourited that one. I like the other one better but I think that's just because the eyes are bigger and able to show more detail. Anyways I still think this is awesome!
Good use of the triangle! Spot on focus, beautiful model and I really like the fact you didn't edit out the freckles. This score has been upgraded to 10.
Jamie...this is just as excellent as the first one...I will say although that I liked the tilt of her head just a little bit better...but her eyes are soooo mesmerizing...with that hair...wow...excellent job once again
stunning...beautiful face, eyes, lighting...love the lipstick...well done...my only negative would be her fingernail. I know it's clean, but you hav to look twice as it looks dirty when you first glance there...perhaps some nail polish??? 8
Great portrait of this young woman. Lighting is great showing off some beautiful red tones in that lovely hair. Her eyes are stunning too and the great lighting just allows them to shine. I do have some small critiques (ah, man she just had to go spoil a great commentary with criticism:-) ) First, her head is chopped - it would be much better to have the full head shot aesthetically and professionally. Next is that I think it would add more visual interest if you composed the crop to include her full folded arms all the way out to the elbows. Why? Because then you get the full body expression AND a nice subtle triangle shape of the body.
stunning image of a beautiful woman the focus is spot on
i just feel her face is a tad over exp and the chin looks a bit too smoothed
but it should score well *9* for me
There's something about those eyes that keeps me in the frame. I am not so much stunned about the quality of the photo itself, it is just the eyes that keep me interested, and therefore you brought them out very well.
Leave the comments for the pros.. Something bothers me in this comp. I know its strong but with this girl it soemhow does not fit. She is soft and beautifull and Im faced with an A frame comp. Still a nice pic
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