The yellow street lines and the green bushes seem out of place, like they were missed during the processing of the photo. Edges seem a little crisp. Good idea though.
Good title and subject. I like this picture because it really utilizes the desaturation with a purpose. I think the cropping could have been adjusted so the color storefront is more central in the framing. But still a nice shot nonetheless.
Nice try. Your crop is too tight to make it work really good - and - you deffinitly should have taken out the yellow road stripe. If the store is color - what are you trying to highlight with the stripe and shrubs still color too??