Greetings from the Critique Club
I love the tones of this shot and the lighting is wonderful. I also like what you've done with the processing, especially the vignetting. In a different challenge I think this had potential to score higher. I don't think many people "got" the humor in a child drunk behind the bar :) Also, as Moose408 mentioned the horizon is tilted slightly and doesn't help the composition. Speaking of the composition I really like the arrangement that you have created. I love the triangular composition created with the bottles and bar and the girl in the center works well.
The colors in this are really nice as well, the browns are just wonderful. Overall sharpness is also very good.
I think with the photo straightened and more of the girl in view (and in a different challenge) this would have been a high scoring photo. |