Greetings from the Critique Club.
First impressions are that the detail here is great. The B&W has great tones.
Technically this is good. It is composed nicely and the B&W conversion is first rate. The background is a bit distracting - some blurring in PP may have softened it a little. Given this is inside I doubt you could do much about the lighting but there are some hotspots that stand out.
Artistically this is ok. This is a study of an old plane rather than an artistic shot of the plane. An airman standing in front of the plane would have made all the difference.
In summary this is a good shot that probably deserved a little more scorewise.
Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry |
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