The shot tells a story quite well. I think the problem (in my opinion anyways) is the processing. I think that the topaz was a little too heavy. In my opinion (and that's all it is) processing should be subtle. (In fact, I noticed that you took out the topaz detail except for the guy and that's where I notice it the most. The rest of the scene looks to have the "right" level of processing.
That aside, I think that if you just showed his head and the foot it might have been more effective.
But all nit-picking aside, I enjoy this image and it certainly made me laugh. :) |