I get it and I may not express this well but with all the dark hair, it loses something for me. It appears out of focus at the heads. Maybe it is just me or my monitor (not likely my monitor) but it isn't really telling the story of your title for me.
Ok, I'll be honest here... meh.
...ok not very helpful, so let me say that the subject, even for a candid, is not interesting at all to me. The lighting is bad - everything on the right just melts into a large, black mass.
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