nice shoot, I been looking lately at alot of wedding and portrait how to videos. for this one crop out some of the wall and see if it adds to draw the eye to the couple more. you cant do it now but before you click the picture see if someone needs to remove hair from their face.
To give a different feel to the picture you could have the guy's hand to come up and touch the girls,I dont know if to would be better but recreate the shoot and see if it is
Grear shot of the couple. I like the lean...it gives it a little extra something from the ordinary. I have to agree with colorcarnival about there being a little too much wall though. It kind of overpowers the couple.
I can't decide if I think there's too much blurry foreground or just the right amount. I do like the narrow DOF, but feel like maybe there's just a bit too much wall out front.