Hi Jeremy,
Greetings from the Critique Club...
This is the second entry of yours I've had the pleasure to study and comment on.
I agree with your other commenters -- the sepia tones (and the absence of any elements that would give away the year) has this feeling like an old photo.
I think your photo suffered a bit from the "train" being more of a distracting rather than enhancing element - it's not very photogenic or interesting as presented. While it's a technically good shot it doesn't have a particularly strong composition -- more of a documentary/journalistic feel. (I can see it printed and displayed in the local luncheonette as a representation of a time gone by.)
Please PM me if you have any questions or comments.
Regards, (from nearby Yardley)
Theresa |
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