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As a previous commenter indicated there is just too much going on in this image. Yes it is central but there is no subject per se. Your eye is taken all over the frame. Simple is always better. For a staged shot like this start with one item or element and add to it incrementally. All of these items are interesting by themselves but together they compete for the viewers interest making chaos. Looking through your profile your image "Butterflies" works well because it is simple. |
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