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i'd be surprised if there wasn't a better angle to take this picture from. i just find myself wanting more really. ones attention is equally split between the wheels, the bendy pipework and the flowers in the foreground. it feels cluttered and there's nothing to focus on. portrait orientation seems a bit of a strange choice too... if it wasn't possibly to fit the whole locomotive in, possibly try to focus on just one aspect. the way i'm typing this, with the screen half scrolled down, i can now only see the wheels and flowers. if it were cropped in this manner (bottom 2/5ths say, and landscaped) and made larger then i think in my mind, it might feel more, erm, composed? |