I like the subject, but I think that if you had cropped the image so that we see only the crayons (in the same configuration), it would be much more powerful. I am not sure, but I think the focus is a tiny bit off as well?
a smaller aperture would IMO improve this photo....I can't tell what point you were trying to focus on if you were trying to make it fuzzy in the forground and fuzzy in the background...a smaller aperture might help your lens bring out some sharpness assuming that the above statement was not your goal
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