Neat idea, and nice soft light for this, but too smooth in my view... would have benefited more from a restrained "film grain" effect. Though I'm not crazy about the large area of upper right negative space, I'm interested in what's on the backdrop. If it's light, bravo! More of that would have been fantastic. Forties-era glamour portraits usually have very idiosyncratic light arrangements on backdrops, and this reminds me of that. (If it's just pattern on canvas, well composed anyway.) 6
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