Very creative, Dave. Love the dramatic lighting. Maybe go a little darker for a contrasty drama. Actually, it looks like a cool place to hang out. :) But don't give up on your landscape shots - that stuff is too good to let go.
This is an interesting contrast to the rest of your work. I would love to see this in black and white, or maybe with some more smoothing on the red curtain in the background. So cool, photography is such a great way to express your emotions.
Good lighting (a little hot on the right side) and great symmetry in the composition. It needs a more dramatic secondary subject instead of the dangling black drape thingy - like you are facing something terrible and fierce. No, not Godzilla. Who knows. I could be way off base on what your concept is here anyway. :)