I like this, but it would have looked better without the people in the background, and a dark backdrop to create drama and atmosphere.... but seeing as it was probably a candid and not a set up shot (I'm presuming), it's a good effort.
A good idea: both the man and girl on left are engaged in the action.
There ar a couple of things here that could improve a lot the image: (1) The half-girl at the right is a no-no. She does not add anything to the image. Croppin her out would keep the viewer looking on what matters. (2) The white balance seems off to me: for example, his face is too greenish (Ok, it could be the reflection of the table, but still would be better if corrected).
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