The white light coming from the bear's left is very harsh. You might try diffusing it with a piece of paper.
I think if you were just to eliminate the white light and try a super long exposure with just the red light from the bear's right it would turn out cool. It would give it the "evil toy" look.
if you were to stick with the white light, I would move the bear to the right of the frame and center the nose on the right "thirds" imaginary line.
If you were to use just the red, do the oppisite. |