Great shot, well composed. I think I'd skip having the fish tank in the photo, but I like the focus on the phone and the melodramatic guy in the background.
good concept, but needed slightly better staging and lighting. The fish tank is distracting, and I would have avoided it. The photo is underexposed, and I probably would have used a more shallow depth of field.
The "waiting" element doesn't come across as strongly as it should. Reducing the size of the phone and increasing the size of the man (perhaps having him look at his watch) would have strengthened the message. The phone's yellow tint is distracting.