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And God Said, "Let There Be Light..."
And God Said, "Let There Be Light..."
VivaLaAlexander


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Challenge: Twisted II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-450D Rebel XSi
Location: My house
Date: Sep 27, 2009
Aperture: f4.5
ISO: 200
Shutter: 20s
Galleries: Action
Date Uploaded: Sep 27, 2009

 I love light painting.

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Place: 63 out of 155
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Olympus OM-D E-M1 Mark II
Olympus 60mm f/2.8 Macro M.Zuiko Digital ED
 10/06/2009 09:07:25 AM
A fun exercise in painting with light for sure. Something about it's not quite there on the fine presentation level for me, and I'm sorry but can't really put a finger on it. Maybe it's the textured material that the book is on, or it could be the width of the light trails (they seem kind of wide). It's just not crisp and making me go "Wow". Nonetheless, I wish you good luck.
Nikon D80
Tamron SP AF 17-50mm f/2.8 Di II LD Aspherical (IF) for Nikon
 10/04/2009 06:56:44 AM
This is wonderfully balanced.. the blue tones also add to the atmosphere
Olympus E-620
Olympus 14-42mm f.3.5-5.6 ED Zuiko Digital Zoom
 10/02/2009 10:36:31 PM
Neat idea and clever title.
Canon EOS-5D
Canon EF 17-40mm f/4.0 L USM
 10/01/2009 01:35:01 PM
*not voting as I'm in this challenge-just commenting since I've seen requests for comments in the challenge thread*

Cool idea and you did a very nice job of make smooth lines. Soemtimes when one is trying to make lines perfect they do it slowly and it ends up shakey. This is not shakey looking at all. My only nitpicks are one the line at the bottom on the carpet or sand (I beleive it is carpet). Which brings me to my second nitpick. The carpet/whatever it is itself. I'm almost positive it's carpet at least but to someone voting fast they may just think it's noise and vote you down. next time a smoother surface would probably help.

HTH
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Nikon D40
Nikon AF Zoom-Nikkor 70-300mm f/4.0-5.6D ED
 09/30/2009 10:58:52 AM
Very cool.
Canon EOS-450D Rebel XSi
Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
 09/30/2009 08:07:05 AM
a square crop to center the subject would have been better than having it off center. HOwever great subject and excellent painting with light photo.
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