*not voting as I'm in this challenge-just commenting since I've seen requests for comments in the challenge thread*
too cute of an idea. Love the creativity here. I also kinda dig how you've added the warning, gives this some extra life. What I would suggest to do differently is to concider complimentary colors when shooting. so maybe a green bg to go with the red, and to avoid harsh shadows put a light facing the bg but behind the subject. That can also had a very nice gradient as well. if not complimentary colors a plain black or white bg would always be a classic way to go as well. the blue just doesn't work here. just my opinion. and a slightly lower POV would probably help a lot too. I think shooting them more straight on as if they really were people would do a lot towards drawing the viewer into thier story.
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