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Confused composition - trees, odd positioning in frame of the two primary subjects, overlapping of subjects, profusion of geometry with the square architecture, and the more organic train, the blocky currves of the plane, the more modern curves of the other train, and then the trees - all makes it difficult to get into this image. Looks like not a good day for light, either: very very general, very blank illumination on everything, nothing to bring the eye to a primary focus anywhere. 4 |