1/5 for meeting the challenge, 2/5 for technique, composition - total score, 3.. The composition is quite nice, but the depth of field is so shallow that elements of the subject are blurred; the overall contrast seems a bit too high, and the background a bit too dark.
I can see what you were thinking, but somehow these flowers don't show that "boredom and anticipation" of waiting. It is a good try, and a nice composition.
The focus looks a bit soft in some areas of the flower. It also looks a little underexposed to me. I would prefer some more light on the leaves to help them stand out from the background.
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