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I would say that the only thing that is hurting you here is the over brightness and saturation of the greens. The sky would be just perfect with if the greens where a little tuned down.
Good placement on this shot and a marvelous scene, well done
Too much HDR in the upper half of the image but the bottom is absolutely gorgeous. The dirt path, the surreal-looking grass, the textures on the smoke stack. All i would change is the color of the sky and grass just a bit, then sharper up the building. otherwise, great!