I like the textures and colors. I just think that this image don't have the details i expect to see in HDR. This close-up of a flower too used in dpchallenge already, but i think you used it in a different way. The shot is artistic for me too. The background looks distracting. Good luck and i'm sorry if i was rude.
This seems soft and unclear. I think most of it is due to the use of excessive JPEG compression. Your file size of only 36k indicates a highly compressed image and that is what is robbing most of the detail and sharpness from this image. Check your compression settings when you save your file. Always adjust JPEG compression so that your file size is as large as possible, but within the challenge limit. (200k for this one)