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To my eye, your lighting lets you down here, both in the progression of brightness from foreground to background, and in those shadpws. I personally would at least have started by backlighting the set-up, and working from there to fill in shadows, but this seems like a single flash lightsource, or at any rate too close to the camera's perspective. The depth of field also isn't really that great - it may actually be so, but the inclusion of areas beyond what I'd call acceptable sharpness actually only serves to emphasise the limits of focus, rather than the depth of it. 4 |