I like what you're trying to do here but feel like it needs just a little something more to make it jump out at me. Good work, tweak it a little and I think you'll be on to a winner.
OK shot, the line of shadows down the center isn't appealing. The photo needs a focal point,B&W give it nice mood and contrast is good. Go for a more creative point of view next time.6
Ah, you know what means DDOF! Nice composition, B/W works well. If the dark parts of the board where a bit darker (more contrast selectively? or some burning ?), the effect could even be more effective IMHO.