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Composition isn't pleasing. The heron(?) is too centered, the flower blocks the center of the bird. Might have tried stepping to your left to compose the flowers off the bird. Since the bird is looking to the left, may have tried to compose the bird to the right a bit more (rule of thirds), so that the bird is looking into the frame. IMHO. On a positive note, you captured great texture and color of the feathers and the eye and beak. |