Hi from the Critique Club,
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This looks like a fun shot!!!
they eyes on this person seem very kind and fun! You had an excellent idea here, using the pasta as a fan. There is not a lot here that can be improved on it is a nice shot, maybe next time use a darker background as this would pop the pasta, eyes and skin.
You could have gone with more saturation with her eyes, there is a wonderful tutorial on here about eyes, have a look as I think this shot could do with a pop. Whether it be her eyes, the pasta or eyes.
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