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A lack of colour impact, for me - a white balance thing, perhaps? Fairly chaotic composition - the three overlapping figures add confusion, the cropping of the balloon ... if you'd got down at low level and shot to fame the person holding that rope entirely against the background of the balloon, for instance, you'd have a far stronger image. Including the background only on image left doesn't really seem to add anything to this, especially when cropping out the otop and left of the balloon. 5 |