Hi from the Critique Club,
You asked for your shot to have an in depth comment from a member of the Critique Club.
You have got drama going on in here. You didn't do to badly with your score here, most people don't think statues are very hard to work with versus a live scene. But you picked a very dramatic statue.
The focal point is on the base of the statue when it needed to be higher up on the face. A different angle, maybe getting yourself a little higher we could have seen more details of what is pulling the mans eyelids. The black triangles are distracting in this shot and pull away from the main focal point.
Your post processing is solid though.
|