This is a great shot of a tough old man. The tones are awesome. The lighting is dramatic. Great job. Two small issues I have with the photo are the fact that the subject is not quite centered and I am not sure if it is the texture of the shirt, but it looks like there is a thumb print right on the chest. I give this a high 9!
like the position on the first thirth line and the man that look on the left, on the "closed" side of the frame.like the B&W and the light.very good expression of the model.
Those eyes make me want to look off of the near (left) side of the photo. A slightly different comp (subject on the right third) that made you look across to the far side (left) could have added to this photo. Just an idea.