There are actually two blue windows :) Too much building and not enough sky Bob. If the airplane was part of the composition then I would have probably given it a little more breathing room. Great DOF!
Edit: I do like the symmetry of the image. it's a dull building. Ho-hum in my books but the vanishing points and leading lines towards the plane is great.
You captured this picture at the perfect moment. Excellent lighting, almost ominous. I get the feeling you were trying to elicit the memories of 9/11. You have done it.
The few assymetrical elements add interest to a lackluster image. But there is still not a good center of focus to serve as an anchor for the viewer as he explores the photo.
Sweet shot but way too grainy. Could have used a few runs through NeatImage. I think the graininess could have worked if the shot had been duotone or B&W. Also, you could have cloned out those two pale windows.
I love the composition and subject here. The contrast in shapes and colors is nice. One thing I found distracting though is the appearance of grainyness and artifacts in the sky.
Not two? Like the idea of the shot, not completely happy with the execution - I think I would have tried to frame the plane further from the edge of image, to start with - it's really too close to the edge for happiness for me. I like the processing, though I guess many won't, although the very hard halo's from sharpening I could live without. 6
high noise in the sky... maybe due to too much oversharpening. The halo around the plane suggest that there was way to much sharpening. Try NeatImage before processing your picture next time.
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