Thanks to all for comments -- yes, it IS cropped too tight. I appreciate the confirmation.
I found myself in a photographer's dilemma as I had a great shot of this fellow and his partner waiting for the next customer. At the "eleventh" hour I decided to recrop it because you could identify the partner (I wouldn't want someone to post my shot so I didn't want to post his) I tried the crop and thought it still communicated waiting.
He sure does seem to be waiting :) 4/5 for meeting the challenge, 3/5 for technique and composition. Overall photo is a bit dark; cropping seems a bit close side to side.