Hi from the Critique Club,
You asked for your shot to have an in depth comment from a member of the Critique Club.
I really like the simplicity of this shot, very nice to see.
You did very well on the saturations of colours, the colours themselves, the DOF and the POV. I think what is hurting this though is the blur that you have going on in the front of the shot. Cropping it right up to the in focus dribbles would have been more pleasing to the eye.
Your sharpness is tack sharp, this is a very good shot and one i can see hanging on a wall, well done |