Hi from teh C Club
you asked for a more in depth comment on your shot in this challenge.
First impressions that you have a good leading line, your placement of the flower is strong and solid. You background is a nice buttery smooth feel to it. Then we get to the flower heads. I am not really sure how you got this look to it. It seems overally sharp, but not in focus or sharp at all. You have halo's going around the heads. I can not tell in your notes how you did this, maybe some smoothing? I am not sure but it doesn't work for this shot.
Your DOF and POV are strong, so try taking it again with these strong points and see what happens
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