the subject is overpowered by the rest of the picture. it is flat and almost non existent due to the angle; lighting. using the boxes edges and shadow more as well as centering it better and getting closer would have helped
Nice use of light, I think I may have liked it a little more if a slightly larger box would have been used so the windows do not overpower the size of the box but still a good idea and well framed and lit shot.